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Who is she, what is her life
Daily tourment and torturing pain
Struggles with family through sickness
Battles with each other in times of health
Aside from that, the world shuns her
Despises her for her beauty, her mind and soul
Even in sleep the laughs plague her weary being
An intolerable amount of years spent loathing existence
How can she remedy the disease of life?
Suicide, no thats an ugly thing to call it
Self liberation from false imprisonment, thats it!
As the moon sets, she will rise in the name of freedom.
Take the knife from the cabinet and dig her self free
Escape the shackles of the burden called life
Looked down upon once, she now will gaze down from heaven


Her body stained by crimson relieve
Fleeing soul escaping through plentiful wounds
Death by a thousand cuts.
Her rescue from lifes prision is almost near.
Blood rains down upon the hateful earth,
Saturating the hearth with scarlet despair
As things get dark she hums a small prayer
Wishing her own soul safe passage to above.
         "please allow  my soul in
          weigh me against the feather, i have no sin
          you will see I'm pure
          never did I cave to sins sweet allure
          please grant my soul safe passage
          levitate me to you in your carriage
          being stuck on earth i fear
          for I am not wanted here"
Soon she will join the stars and her ancestors
Assumed dull on earth
But shining just as bright as the rest, among the heavens
©2005-2009 ~life-and-death
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Author's Comments

I really liked the original version so i decided to leave that as is and then rewrite it here with alot of changes Edited May 9/05 Ok well i decided to come back to this and redo some more of it adding things here and there and thought it was pointless to make a V3 lol hope you like it. Daily Deviation material i think not but baby steps will get you a long way after awhile

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:icongwynblaidd:
Very heavy piece. If this is someone you know, make she she gets some help.

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Carpe Noctem
:iconstrange-foreigner:
the darker the better... I like this

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Men shall say they saw a raindrop fall
And no-one else will care at all ...
:iconheavenzchild:
wow..this is really dense,suicide is never a way out! well done

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God can mend a broken heart ~ if you give Him all the pieces
:iconatrappedlonelysoul:
wow. amazing,beautiful... i have no words... keep it up! :glomp:

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"GoD mAdE rIvErS, gOd MaDe LaKeS, gOd MaDe HiLlArY dUfF...wElL, wE aLl MaKe MiStAkEs..."
:iconmycatsasha:
Wow... I love the line "Self liberation from false imprisonment, thats it." Powerful piece. Good work.

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"I advise you to comply, my instructions should be clear, remember there are worse things than a shattered chandelier!" - The Opera Ghost

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:icondragon-soul89:
wow :OMG: thats is a really strong piece and is has many emotions in it. well done!!
:iconshadow-mage:
Brillant.

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In the darkness I'm small, but people jump for fear when they see me. However, in the light I'm huge and am walked by like I'm nothing. What am I?
:icontearsofblack:
Another amazing piece of work. Very powerfull!! Good work!

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All the while in denial
:iconoutlawjapan:
very descriptive in her pains, pains that I can relate and feel sorry for her. the last three lines of the first stanze are what hit me best, very powerful in my eyes. suicide is something I am against, but what was so powerful especially, "Self liberation from false imprisonment",

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